I used to be the blogger called YAL Book Briefs, but I grew bored of the handle and changed my name to Howdy YAL. I also respond to MJ. I like to read, write, eat truffles, and watch bad Lifetime movies.
The heading should give you a good indicator how this is going. Also, formatting is horrible on Kindle. It's an ARC and from NetGalley so that might be what's going on there. But the grammar....please for the love of god, it should be readable by the time it gets on NG. And show not freaking tell.