I used to be the blogger called YAL Book Briefs, but I grew bored of the handle and changed my name to Howdy YAL. I also respond to MJ. I like to read, write, eat truffles, and watch bad Lifetime movies.
I read the excerpt on Amazon and that's enough to make me not want to buy the book, author bad behavior aside. Seriously, I don't buy that sad excuse for bad grammar. You want the story's to be raw, Eve? Fine. But you also want them to be readable. And readable they aren't. Instead, it makes the work look unprofessional and lazy. Which is really a shame because a subject that is this sensitive really should be brought to attention. Also, if you want to convey emotion, there are other ways to do so than using all caps.