I used to be the blogger called YAL Book Briefs, but I grew bored of the handle and changed my name to Howdy YAL. I also respond to MJ. I like to read, write, eat truffles, and watch bad Lifetime movies.
Honestly, reads a bit like an Insane!Harry HP fan fic mixed in with the parts of where Bliss was insane during Blue Bloods. I'm ignoring the comma misuse. I'm assuming it's for style. But really, it's not doing the book favors.